7.11.2008

i hate you!

this is a short poem i have composed. it's called "i hate you"

i hate you
i love the fact that i hate you
the fact that i love that i hate you liberates me
you are what i hate

i hate the way you treat me
i hate the way you talk to me
i hate everything about 123
i hate the way you always leave me dry!

if this be an error, and upon me proven
then, Virgin Mobile, i will still hate you, even the day after tomorrow!


-S.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

You must really hate virgin mobile to write such a bad poem.

Ciaa said...

sonnets are usually bad. take, for instance, sonnet 116 by the very legendary William Shakespeare, that is pure shit! a pure shitty sonnet. so, the shittiness on the one i wrote does not deviate much from that of sonnet 116.

yes, i really hate VM!

alapan said...

ROFL

You switched for the wrong reasons bru

Anonymous said...

...
What do I do with all these feelings tearing me up inside?
What do I do with all these wasted hours dreaming of you at night?
I' d like to call you sometimes

What would you do if you knew the truth?
What would you do if I told you the story of my life?
Would you find me overly familiar towards you?
Would you call me crude, fling me aside to the birds?
What do I do with all these feelings holding me back inside?
What do I do with all these wasted hours dreaming of you at night?
I'd like to call you sometime
I'd like you to need me one time
I'd like to call you sometime
What would you do if I kissed you?
What would you do if I held your hand and laid you down?
Would you recognize it's a need I've been fighting for so long?
Would you recognize it's a hunger only you can fill?
What do I do with all these feelings warming me up inside?
What do I do with all these glorious hours dreaming of you at night?
I'd like to call you sometime
I'd like you to need me one time
I'd like to have you all the time
I'd like to call you...

Ciaa said...

i think you already know what i would do...